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RE: "I say this morning, in fact it was more like..."

It has been delightful reading your now daily posts. Please continue in like fashion. Your capacity to grow and learn, even within the space of three short paragraphs, is comforting. As evidence, I direct your gaze to the above post's penultimate sentence, in which you bite the bullet and employ comma/space/transitional with perfect grace. This sort of "but" bares itself not in the service of sexiness but as the faithful first mate of clarity.

Yesterday's happy hour was charming. See you at 9:30.
P.S. Though I have opened my own glass house for viewing, I will not apologize for alliteration. On all other points of style, sling away.

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